perspicacious ([info]perspi) wrote,
@ 2008-05-18 22:12:00
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Current mood: relaxed
Entry tags:housefic-complete

Fic: Plonk
Title: Plonk
Author: perspi
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 308
Pairing: House/Foreman
Summary: "If I cut the wire for that note, will you knock it off and come back to bed?"
Relates to Episodes: Mentions of events in 'No Reason.'
Disclaimer: House MD was created by David Shore and not me. Me, I own nothing.
Notes: Written for queenzulu, who asked for sappy House/Foreman, and as an exercise in bifictionality. Also for the [info]100_situations challenge.
My prompt was: #24: String

Comments and concrit always welcome.


Plonk


Foreman didn't twitch when House got out of bedmiddle-of-the-night forays occurred often enough that he barely roused anymore. He did twitch, however, when the piano started. A loud, piercing, single note, repeated over and over.

He huffed, then rolled over to stare at the ceiling, listening to the piano plonk. Plonk. Plonk. He narrowed his eyes in concentration
that plonking was familiar. Foreman groaned aloud when he realized he recognized itthe 'score' from Eyes Wide Shut. Last week House had made him sit through it, in its painful, horrific entirety, as payment on a bet. Someday he'd learn about betting against the man.

House was hunched over at the piano when Foreman finally got sick of the tuneless plonking and came to yell at him. "If I cut the wire for that note, will you knock it off and come back to bed?"

House...pouted. "You paused."

"What?" Foreman would have rolled his eyes but he didn't want to miss the sight of House in a full-on for-real snit.

The plonking continued. "Don't think I didn't notice. You had to psych yourself up to give me a blowjob."

"I didn't immediately peel off your jeans, which could mean I don't like giving blowjobs
"

"
Please, have you seen your mouth?"

"
so the alternative must be that I don't actually find you attractive. Despite all the evidence, despite every choice where I chose you. That...is fucked up."

House finally stopped playing, going still and silent. Foreman crossed the room, putting his hands on his hunched shoulders.

"I was looking at the bullet scar," he whispered in House's ear. "And thinking about keeping you from bleeding out." Foreman reached over House's shoulder and hit a key: one final plonk. "We need to do one thing very soon," he growled.

House smirked and followed him back to bed.
 
 


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[info]queenzulu
2008-05-19 04:02 am UTC (link)
Oh, yay! So much love, again, and also, thank you for reposting it so that I could bookmark it!

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[info]perspi
2008-05-19 04:04 am UTC (link)
Yay, love! All for you. And I just realized I could add it to my 100_situations table, so, there it is! EEE!

(I even got a chance to polish it a little, and add a proper ending. So, *happy dances*.)

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[info]daisylily
2008-05-19 10:04 am UTC (link)
That was great fun, and sounded exactly like them.

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[info]perspi
2008-05-19 02:22 pm UTC (link)
Hee! Thank you!

I had a good time writing this in the comments of queenzulu's post, but then I thought, "Surely this is long enough to add to my 100_situations table?" And lo, it was, and it was good. :)

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[info]karaokegal
2008-05-19 09:06 pm UTC (link)
Whoooo-hooooo. Rarepair slash. For some reason I'm willing to deal with a bit of schmoop as long as it ISN'T H/W.

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[info]perspi
2008-05-20 02:38 pm UTC (link)
Yay! Thank you for reading, and the lovely comment! I almost didn't write it, but then I smacked myself upside the head--bifictionality means I should be willing to experiment, right?

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[info]ignazwisdom
2008-05-21 12:54 am UTC (link)
YAYAYAYAYAY! The dialog is dead-on--lovely work!

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[info]perspi
2008-05-28 04:27 pm UTC (link)
YAYAY! Thank YOU!

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[info]chewy_101
2008-05-28 12:11 pm UTC (link)
Oh man, I so love Foreman. The man doesn't get enough exposure in fiction. I love him with House, let the eye rolls commence! Two very pretty and very strong personalities finding a connection. It is so hot!

I want Foreman to score with everyone. I know he hates being House, but he IS House and *I* love it. He is beautiful and broken in so many ways....

Fabulous fantasy, Perspi, I love it!

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[info]perspi
2008-05-28 04:29 pm UTC (link)
Oh, thank you for reading, and for the fabulous comment! This was an exercise in stretching my pairing muscles--I have always found Foreman rather difficult to write (A Man Should Know felt like pulling teeth, but now I love that story) and I wanted to give Zulu a prezzie. I'm so glad you liked it, too!

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[info]spatula
2008-06-01 04:09 pm UTC (link)
This is lovely. You write a very believable Foreman and your House-with-hurt-feelings is very touching. Thank you!

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[info]perspi
2008-06-01 07:35 pm UTC (link)
Yay, thank you!!

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