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Fic: Tangent Universe

Title: Tangent Universe
Author: perspi
Rating: R
Word Count: 584
Pairing: None
Summary: He wonders briefly at the rumble he feels in the floor, looks out the window to see if it's thunderstorming.
Relates to Episodes: None
Disclaimer: House MD was created by David Shore and not me. Richard Kelly is awesome. Me, I own nothing.
Notes: For the [info]100_situations challenge. Thanks to nightdog for the extra prompting. A first crack at apocalypse-fic, featuring a relatively small apocalypse (as apocalyptii go). Major character death.
My prompt was: #75: Disaster

Comments and concrit always welcome.


Tangent Universe


Foreman glances at his watch and snorts. Still no House at 11:13, typical for the day after they cure their patient for good. He sighs, frustrated, and gets up to get himself another cup of coffee. He wonders briefly at the rumble he feels in the floor, looks out the window to see if it's thunderstorming. He doesn't see what happens next.





He comes awake slowly, a niggling ache pulling him from a warm, deep slumber. The lights around him are dim and soft, the place smells mostly familiar—like a hospital—but a little bit different. He opens his eyes to an unfamiliar ceiling. Okay, different hospital.

Foreman closes his eyes and takes a mental inventory. As he breathes, there's a sickening grinding feeling in his chest; things are moving in there that aren't supposed to be moving. Spikes of pain from what seems like everywhere are starting to demand attention. He can't tell if it's real or phantom pain; he can't seem to feel his legs and arms beyond the hurt. His tongue feels thick in his dry mouth and his brain feels fuzzy—it's probably morphine in the drip. He opens his eyes again to see House sitting next to him and can't hide his surprise.

"Hey honey," House says with forced cheer. "Welcome back."

"What?" Foreman rasps. He's surprised again when it comes out in a whisper.

Suddenly a cell phone screen appears in front of his nose. "Plane crash. A Navy pilot couldn't have aimed it better." House is flipping through pictures of destruction; Foreman recognizes the hulk of the MRI, the old heavy-brick wing of PPTH still standing among smoking ruins. House pauses on a particularly artful picture of the melted glass of the clinic doors, speeds past a shot of a small high-heeled shoe with a foot still in it. "Like a fucking apocalypse."

It takes a surprising amount of effort to look up at House and raise his eyebrow. He notices House's eyebrows are gone, and that, more than anything, freaks Foreman right the hell out.

"I was just parking the bike, the plane hit right in front of me." House is suddenly quiet; he even closes the cell phone quietly and tucks it back in his pocket.

Foreman doesn't want to think about what it means that House is sitting here next to him.

"I'm dying, yeah?" he asks in the loudest half-whisper he can manage.

House is the only one who would give him the unvarnished truth, and for once Foreman is glad of it. "Yeah. Couple hours, a day tops. Wanna see your chart?"

He hurts too much to shake his head, so he just whispers, "No."

There's a press against his lips, cold, and an ice chip slips inside when he opens his mouth. He sucks gratefully for a moment, his eyes sliding closed. The chair squeaks when House shifts his weight, then a rhythmic sound starts up, as familiar to Foreman as the blip of the heart monitor.

House is bouncing his cane against the floor. For a moment Foreman wishes he'd died fast, like everyone else.

"You son of a bitch," he whispers. "You're going to outlive us all."

House's cane stops bouncing; Foreman feels the bed dip a little as House leans on it. "Kinda wish I wouldn't," House growls softly.

Foreman doesn't feel like he can move, so he settles for a slow blink. House doesn't meet his gaze. "Yeah," Foreman breathes, and he closes his eyes.




Manipulated Living
 
  

Comments

I was feeling sort of bad that I didn't get to comment on this earlier, but now I'm greedily pleased because reading the finished product was such a chilling pleasure. That little edge of Foreman's anger is brilliant, as is House suddenly falling quiet.
Oh, thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed it, and I'm having fun writing little bitty ficlets.
I really love ficlets like this where the author gives just enough tantalizing imagery to set up a scene vividly and then lets the reader's imagination run with it!

"Kinda wish I wouldn't," House growls softly.

I am so torn between wishing I knew the whole story and loving just this mysterious little glimpse of what happened. ;-)
Thank you! I don't really know the whole story, either, only that I'm having a lot of fun by tasking myself to only write a bunch of short, short stories. :)
Damn. That's all that keeps running through my head. It figures, just figures, that House would outlive the lot of them because of his habitual lateness.

The line that hit me the hardest was the one about the foot still in the shoe. Cuddy? I suppose it could have been a Clinic patient, but I associate Cuddy with her heels so often that I couldn't think of anyone else right away, and there's no reason House would skip past it so quickly if it belonged to some stranger. Although, it was a little amusing that he would only admire the Clinic in its ruin.

Foreman's logic was painful but probably accurate. House would only be sitting next to him if he'd already lost the people most important to him.

Is it bad that I felt worse for House than I did for Foreman? Sometimes I think the survivors get stuck with the worst of a situation like that.
Thank you! The 'you'll outlive us all' line was the first to come to me, and I built the fic from there.

And yes, the line about the shoe was Cuddy, and I also have an irrational fondness for the line about why House was sitting next to Foreman. Thank you so much for reading, and commenting!
Thank you for the title. It's such a well-written ficlet that it's very rough on me until I remind myself it's AU.
You're welcome--it's definitely, definitely AU. Although it might make for an interesting show-ender, eh?
Very interesting...it shouldn't make me giggle. but it didn't...
I meant it did....x.x
Giggles? I admit, it's a rather absurd thing, that House would outlive them all. That was the first line that came to me, and I built the rest of it from there...
It's amazing what's packed in this little piece, and every time I re-read it I find something new that shines. The tiny detail of House feeding Foreman an ice chip is so small, but it just really gets to me.

*edited because sentences read better with all the words, you know?*

Edited at 2007-11-27 10:41 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I'm so glad you've reread it--I'm having lots of fun with this task of writing just little ficlets. It kinda takes some pressure off, you know?
very nice ficlet...the end is absolutely perfect!
Thank you! I started with the 'you'll outlive us all' line, and it grew from there. :)
Wow, very intense. I'm also torn between wanting to know more about the scenario and completing the story in my head instead.

Foreman doesn't want to think about what it means that House is sitting here next to him.
This sentence pretty much sums up my own feelings.
I've tasked myself with writing 500-ish-word ficlets in an effort to make significant progress on my 100_situations table, and it's kind of freeing to let the readers complete the story in their heads!

Thank you for reading, and commenting!
Very nice and subtle. Good feeling for House and Foreman in that situation. I'm usually not a genfic fan, but I think the world could do with a little more House/Foreman genfic interaction. There's gotta be something left over from Euphoria and the Resignation arc that can be dealt with better than the bushwa that is being perpetrated on us this season.
This isn't what I'd expect from an apocalypse fic. I definitely like it more for that.

It packs a punch in the way that only small things can. Very nice.

Cheers,
AE.
Here via [info]crack_van and that's an awesome pair of stories you've written there.

Bravo!
Why, thank you very much! I certainly enjoyed writing them.